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[กิ่ง ศิลปากร]

  When I was young, I had many imaginations. I like to image myself as some animals. If I had to be an animal, I would be a cat because cat is one of the most popular pets in the world. Everybody loves cats. Cats have special eyes that can see in the dark. I want my eyes to be like cat because I like to see a beautiful place in the dark. Cats have ears that are like a sophisticated satellite dish. They can hear the sound from faraway. If I had ears like cats’, I could know that who’s talking about me. Smell of cats is the best. They can smell food or enemies before they see. The claws of cats are really useful. They’re used to climb the tree, pursue the prey and play the ball. Cats run fast like a little tiger. They are small and active.Cats have beautiful and colorful fur. It is soft and makes cat looks attractive. Sometimes cats look cherished. They like to caress their body especially, their chin and their head. But sometimes they look violent. They look as if they have 2 personalities which enchant me .What’s more, cat is my favorite pet. Cats are easy to take care of. They are safe and clean. They do  not make the house dirty. I do not have to spend much time with them. So if I had to choose to be an animal, cat would be  the first alternative that I determined to choose.

แล้วถามหนูขึ้นต้นด้วยคำว่า since I was young. ได้ป่าวคะ มานจะได้เข้ากับเนื้อเรื่องที่แต่ง
เป็น present tense

[แรม]

When I was young, I had a lot of imaginations. I love to imagine myself as some animals. If I were an animal, I would be a cat because a cat is one of the most popular pets in the world. Everybody loves cats. Cats have special eyes which make them able to see in the dark. I wish my eyes to be like  cats' because I am able to see a beautiful place in the dark. Cats have ears that are like a sophisticated satellite dish. They can hear the sound from faraway places. If I had ears like cats’, so I could know who’s talking about me. The smell perception of cats is the best. They can smell food or enemies before they see. The claws of cats are really useful. They’re used to climb the tree, pursue the prey and play the ball. Cats run fast like a little tiger. They are small and active.Cats have beautiful and colorful fur. It is soft and makes cat look attractive. Sometimes cats look cherished. They like to caress their body especially, their chin and their head. But sometimes they look violent. They look as if they have 2 personalities which enchant me .What’s more, cats are my favorite pet. Cats are easy to take care of. They are safe and clean. They do  not make the house dirty. I do not have to spend much time with them. So if I had to choose to be an animal, cat would be  the first alternative that I determine to choose.


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