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ว่าที่เขียนไปมีอะไรผิดพลาดบ้าง ขอบคุนมาก ๆ ค่ะ To night I will talk about my biography .
My name is..............................my nickname is ICE
I will 17
years old
on the 30 th november 2009 .
I collect
very cute and soft bears.
I love
them very much.
I like everything about
English but I never
forget Thailand .
I
am excellent in English and I can swim .
I can play batmiton basketball .
I stay with my mom and my brother .
my father doesn't stay with the family
because he has hard a great burden and he must work in Changrai
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